README.en improvements

3 files changed, 20 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog b/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog
index d88669423dfe..12311710c9a1 100644
--- a/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog
+++ b/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog
@@ -1,6 +1,10 @@
 # ChangeLog for x11-misc/habak
 # Copyright 2000-2004 Gentoo Technologies, Inc.; Distributed under the GPL v2
-# $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo-x86/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog,v 1.3 2004/03/13 16:06:21 taviso Exp $
+# $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo-x86/x11-misc/habak/ChangeLog,v 1.4 2004/05/13 20:48:44 taviso Exp $
+
+  13 May 2004; Tavis Ormandy <taviso@gentoo.org> files/README.en:
+  Many thanks to Jacek Masiulaniec for making some improvements to 
+  the README.en file.
 
 *habak-0.2.3 (13 Mar 2004)
 
diff --git a/x11-misc/habak/Manifest b/x11-misc/habak/Manifest
index ef08db645ac3..a02e50c65692 100644
--- a/x11-misc/habak/Manifest
+++ b/x11-misc/habak/Manifest
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-MD5 6a3c2c48a6eb5b3f245d0b467ab9ef0a ChangeLog 735
 MD5 9ba014f5ed3e7e1315189a5c3ba58ea4 habak-0.2.1.ebuild 649
+MD5 152ce3fb2c653f54514666a6a14719c8 ChangeLog 892
 MD5 72da0f9200d1d74851077cfb216983bc habak-0.2.3.ebuild 650
-MD5 a3bad86edb4c7320753cadbb90646c37 files/README.en 6727
+MD5 1eb9928171d8bff4312b6fdb48ec4f85 files/README.en 6729
 MD5 29141cd94765be7794ae60b9d1661d5a files/digest-habak-0.2.1 63
 MD5 e158008d2adb7bf05208fc7b45b5d17e files/digest-habak-0.2.3 63
diff --git a/x11-misc/habak/files/README.en b/x11-misc/habak/files/README.en
index 4aac72cf93e5..0bdbc259119f 100644
--- a/x11-misc/habak/files/README.en
+++ b/x11-misc/habak/files/README.en
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Habak - "Ha" Background
 =========
 
 Compilation:
-	We need a compilator, X server and Imlib2. Just run make, that's all.
+	We need a compiler, X server and Imlib2. Just run make, that's all.
 
 Installation:
 	Well, place a ready binary where you want.
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ Installation:
 A short review:
 
 
-Habak are using layers. The lowest layer is just a black screen.
+Habak is using layers. The lowest layer is just a black screen.
 On this you can place other objects, called habaks. There are
 three kinds of habaks: graphic files (images),  fonts and "internal objects"
-(internals). Wallaper are created by putting on a black screen
-one or more any habaks. An order of habaks in command line is an order
+(internals). Wallaper is created by putting on a black screen
+one or more habaks. An order of habaks in command line is an order
 of putting them on desktop, so the last habak will be drawed above
 previous habaks.
 
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Files (images) are included by -i option, ie:
 
 ./habak -i ~/graphics/wallpaper.jpg
 
-will include to desktop tapeta.jpg file. If you typed after -i not a file,
-but a directory, habak will create a list of files in this, randomly
-select any of them, and then will try to load it. In other words,
+will include to desktop wallpaper.jpg file. If you typed after -i not a file,
+but a directory, habak would create a list of files contained within, randomly
+select any one of them, and then try to load it. In other words,
 if you have a lot of pictures in ~/gfx/nice_wallpapers/ then habak
 can choose random image. You only need to run './habak -i ~/gfx/nice_wallpapers/'
 
@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ are available, "int" and "INT", which do an interlacing. For example:
 ./habak -I int
 
 Internal habak "int" do an interlacing, by turning out even lines
-of image. Very nice effect, especially if wallpaper is so gaudy.
+of image. Very nice effect, especially if wallpaper is gaudy.
 "INT" habak works identical as "int", but turns out odd lines
 (by putting together "int" and "INT" you can turn out all lines of screen).
 
-By default lines aren't turned out in fact, but go darked (in my opinion
+By default lines aren't turned out in fact, but darked (in my opinion
 it generates a better effect), but you can control it by
 -c color modifier (i will tell about it later).
 
 
-USING PHILOSOFY
+USAGE PHILOSOPHY
 You can (and you should to) put habaks together, ie.
 
 ./habak -i ~/gfx/cool.jpg -I int -i ~/gfx/small_logo.png -f ~/.fonts/deltafont.ttf -f ~/.fonts/deltafont.ttf/10
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ image, then deltafont.ttf font, and eventually one more time deltafont.ttf
 file, but this time with size of 10 pixels. Simple.
 
 MODIFIERS
-Obviously, alone habaks won't be so elastic, so there are available a lot
+Obviously, alone habaks wouldn't be so elastic, so there are available a lot
 of modifiers that affect on them look. Some modifiers are even
 necessary. Modifiers are options, that are given following
 a definition of any habak - they affect only just followed habak.
@@ -152,8 +152,7 @@ i generats *two* font habaks with the same content, but
 one of it is displacemented a little, and have smaller
 transparency. It gives so nice effect of shadow under text. By
 putting together *several* such shadows differenced in size of font
-and intensivity of transparency you can achieve
-very fantasy effects.
+and intensivity of transparency you can achieve fantastic effects.
 
 Finally, fire up:
 
@@ -162,5 +161,5 @@ Finally, fire up:
 Here i added an internal habak "interlace", between picture
 from /usr/local/share/backgrounds/lens and font habaks, so
 image is faced by small grid of interlacing, but text is not
-(becouse is placed above interlacing).
+(because it is placed above interlacing).